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Is everyone should be an entrepreneur ?

OUT LIINE
    I figure that not everyone should be an entrepreneur.
   Argument 1: Do you have the abilities to become an entrepreneur?
   Argument 2: Everyone has their own pursue.
   Argument 3 :We must pondering ourselves to create the most suitable for their own development model.
   
 

   Is everyone should be an entrepreneur ?

       Counterargument：Everyone should do what you want to do rather than should be an entrepreneur.
      Nowadays, more and more people want to to be an entrepreneur. But they only see the profit earned when someone became an entrepreneur. Linkedln founder Reid Hoffman put forward the global pattern of personal strategy: everyone should have the entrepreneurial spirit. There also has one book to said everyone should be an entrepreneur.(Guo Yaluo 2016) But I figure that not everyone should be an entrepreneur. These are my personal point of view as follows.
         Do you have the abilities to become an entrepreneur? Someone just fantasy to become an entrepreneur. But they just have a few abilities. They do not have the abilities to create their own firm or find their own work team. They just have a chasing heart.Some people may argue that, the chasing heart is enough. But if you imagine that the one just have one heart, do not have mind, do not have the ability. Do you think he will succeed ? It sounds like plant people, just alive, but has no ability to do anything.
         Everyone has their own pursue. For instance, someone just want to live with the so-so level life rather than high level life. Personally , I think that if we can do what we want to do , what we can do is the best. Not we must become an entrepreneur. "Everyone has to ask himself three questions every year: What do you have? What would you like? What do you want to give up?" (MaYun 2017). So we should depend on ourselves pursuit to develop goals rather than follow the public to choose to be an entrepreneur.
       We must pondering ourselves to create the most suitable for their own development model.(Wang Jianlin 2014). The most important thing for an entrepreneur is to put all the resources together. Like a developer, we only build a house. Do we developers build a brick? The answer is No. We are only organiser,the design,money,materials and other resources together, this is the most thing about entrepreneur. So if you do not have this ability, just find some what you can do.
        BrianChesky(2015) said as an entrepreneur must to be solve their own problems, when denied, whether to stick to it. When face of the growth economic problem, will you find the real favourite products?  Of course we can see that, how important with a strong heart! Those who believe they have strong heart claim that they can do it, they will never give up. But the reality is that some people do not keep going for three days. For example, one of my friends wants to lose her weight. She told me she will not eat snacks, will keep running. But, the results you can guess, she give up just on the next day. So if you want to do something, please keep it up! 
        According to the above analysis, I figure that not everyone should be an entrepreneur. There also has someone said, not everyone suitable to become an entrepreneur.(Liu Chunzhi & Ren Zhiqiang) Entrepreneurship is not a game, but "hit the world". Thus, just do what you want to do. Not everyone should be a entrepreneur.
 
Reference:
 
      BrianChesky (2015,18th,Dec.) Airbnb founder, the name of essay is everyone could be a entrepreneur but not should  be. Retrieved from:                                                                                http://www.chinairn.com/news/20151218/150948789.shtml
 
      Liu ChuanZhi (2015,20th Aug). Entrepreneur, Global CEO development conference Co- Chair.Retrieved from:
 
       Ren Zhiqiang(2015,20th,Dec)the name of essay is everyone could be a entrepreneur but not should  be. Retrieved from:                                                                                http://www.chinairn.com/news/20151218/150948789.shtml
 
       MaYun(2015.first,Jan), Entrepreneur and philanthropist.The name of essay is Everyone should ask themselves three questons one year.Retrieved from: http://finance.sina.com.cn/chanjing/gsnews/2017-01-26/doc-ifxzyxmt1307976.shtml

       Wang Lianlin(2014-05-06 ) The name of essay is Anyone who is a business should keep in mind two words.Retried from: http://www.tmtpost.com/499584.html

     
     
       

 

Comments

  1. Unknown7 October 2017 at 11:59

    Hi Lucy, a great article you have done. I agree with you that I also disagree that everyone should be an entrepreneur. But I agree with that everyone should have the entrepreneurship. You have many facts and points to support your point. Very good!
    My suggestion is : "Is everyone should be an entrepreneur" should change into "should everyone be an entrepreneur".
    Thank you.

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  2. Unknown7 October 2017 at 14:55

    Hi lucy, Nice post but dont forget that in argumentative paragraph you need to add the counter argument and the rebuttal paragraph so that the reader can believe more with your post. Thank you hehehe

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  3. zhangxi8 October 2017 at 10:45

    Hi Lucy.If you change the order of argument 1 and argument 2,The mean of this article will be more clear。 @_@ good job

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  4. Unknown8 October 2017 at 18:14


    Hi lucy nice post you’ve written there. My suggestion for you is I think you might want to change “more and more people want to be an entrepreneur” into “some people want to be an entrepreneur” because it’s more effective actually. The second one is if you use “must”, you should use verb 1 after must. For example, must pondering should be “must ponder”. Overall, I like how you explained your article. Good job and keep it up :)

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  5. Krisna Juniyanti9 October 2017 at 18:58

    Hi lucy!
    Nice essay ! And i like reading your essay hehe
    Just want to give sugestion, don't forget to make counter paragraph and the rebuttal :D
    And don't forget to sort the refrences ;D
    Thankyou

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  6. Unknown9 October 2017 at 19:23

    Good work Lucy, just straight to the suggestions. I don't see any problem in organization but the problem in mechanics. For instance, you miss using a word. 'But' is a word to connect two ideas in one sentence, but you use it to connect from a sentence to the another sentence. It supposed to use 'however' rather than 'but'.

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  7. Unknown9 October 2017 at 23:23

    Hi Lucy,
    You have already done a good essay but you should use some conjunctions for your essay to be more tight.

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  8. Unknown10 October 2017 at 02:53

    Hi Lucy, actually your essay is good, but next time you can more tend to care bout spacing, word colour, and so on

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  9. Ivy Guo10 October 2017 at 07:06

    OUT LIINE
    I figure that not everyone should be an entrepreneur.

    Argument 1: Everyone has their own pursue.

    Argument 2: Do you have the abilities to become an entrepreneur?
    Everyone has their own pursue.

    Argument 3 :We must pondering ourselves to create the most suitable for their own development model.





    Should everyone be an entrepreneur ?

    Counterargument：Everyone should do what you want to do rather than should be an entrepreneur.
    Nowadays, more and more people want to to be an entrepreneur. But they only see the profit earned when someone became an entrepreneur. Linkedln founder Reid Hoffman put forward the global pattern of personal strategy: everyone should have the entrepreneurial spirit. There also has one book to said everyone should be an entrepreneur.(Guo Yaluo 2016) But I figure that not everyone should be an entrepreneur. These are my personal point of view as follows.

    Everyone has their own pursue. For instance, someone just want to live with the so-so level life rather than high level life. Personally , I think that if we can do what we want to do , what we can do is the best. Not we must become an entrepreneur. "Everyone has to ask himself three questions every year: What do you have? What would you like? What do you want to give up?" (MaYun 2017). So we should depend on ourselves pursuit to develop goals rather than follow the public to choose to be an entrepreneur.

    Do you have the abilities to become an entrepreneur? Someone just fantasy to become an entrepreneur. But they just have a few abilities. They do not have the abilities to create their own firm or find their own work team. They just have a chasing heart.Some people may argue that, the chasing heart is enough. But if you imagine that the one just have one heart, do not have mind, do not have the ability. Do you think he will succeed ? It sounds like plant people, just alive, but has no ability to do anything.


    We must pondering ourselves to create the most suitable for their own development model.(Wang Jianlin 2014). The most important thing for an entrepreneur is to put all the resources together. Like a developer, we only build a house. Do we developers build a brick? The answer is No. We are only organiser,the design,money,materials and other resources together, this is the most thing about entrepreneur. So if you do not have this ability, just find some what you can do.

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  10. Ivy Guo10 October 2017 at 07:06

    BrianChesky(2015) said as an entrepreneur must to be solve their own problems, when denied, whether to stick to it. When face of the growth economic problem, will you find the real favourite products? Of course we can see that, how important with a strong heart! Those who believe they have strong heart claim that they can do it, they will never give up. But the reality is that some people do not keep going for three days. For example, one of my friends wants to lose her weight. She told me she will not eat snacks, will keep running. But, the results you can guess, she give up just on the next day. So if you want to do something, please keep it up!

    According to the above analysis, I figure that not everyone should be an entrepreneur. There also has someone said, not everyone suitable to become an entrepreneur.(Liu Chunzhi & Ren Zhiqiang) Entrepreneurship is not a game, but "hit the world". Thus, just do what you want to do. Not everyone should be a entrepreneur.



    Reference:



    BrianChesky (2015,18th,Dec.) Airbnb founder, the name of essay is everyone could be a entrepreneur but not should be. Retrieved from: http://www.chinairn.com/news/20151218/150948789.shtml



    Liu ChuanZhi (2015,20th Aug). Entrepreneur, Global CEO development conference Co- Chair.Retrieved from:

    http://sike.news.cn/statics/sike/posts/2015/08/219480960.html



    Ren Zhiqiang(2015,20th,Dec)the name of essay is everyone could be a entrepreneur but not should be. Retrieved from: http://www.chinairn.com/news/20151218/150948789.shtml

    MaYun(2015.first,Jan), Entrepreneur and philanthropist.The name of essay is Everyone should ask themselves three questons one year.Retrieved from: http://finance.sina.com.cn/chanjing/gsnews/2017-01-26/doc-ifxzyxmt1307976.shtml

    Wang Lianlin(2014-05-06 ) The name of essay is Anyone who is a business should keep in mind two words.Retried from: http://www.tmtpost.com/499584.html

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